20M, Virginia. This
20M, Virginia. This is my first attempt at writing erotic
material; it?s taken from the first person, and is directed
toward a female audience. I like to write and would like
to know what you think of this rough draft. Thanks
I see you sitting in front of me on the bed, your bra off, you
succulent breast pert and firm shining in the light. You
just in your panties, white soft panties, the kind that
let you see everything but invitingly hide your details.
You ass is smooth and firm, your panties are hugging your
curves. Your red hair is draped on your shoulders. I?m sitting
on the same bed next to you, shirtless, exposing my hairy
neatly kept chest. Trying to get used to the sight of your
beauty. You look back at me, biting your lips, your eyes
telling me, urging me to move close to you.
I?m coming up behind you, wrapping my arms around yours,
my soft hair on my arms tingles on yours. Slowly rubbing
your soft skin, kissing the back of your neck, feeling you
push yourself back into me. Gliding my fingers to your breasts,
rubbing them, gently, in surrounding motion. As I move
in front of you, look into your deep eyes, you see the pure
lust in mine, I slide down between your thighs. As I make
my descent, I suck your nipples, making them harder, wetter.
Gently kiss your salty thighs, teasing you, avoiding your
wetness that I smell the sweet aroma of.
You are smooth shaven,
just a patch of small red hair on top, I slide my hands under
your ass, sliding off your sopping wet panties, pulling
them off your long legs, licking your leg from the side of
your pussy all the way to your ankle as I slide them off. With
your leg in the air, I take it to my mouth and such and lick
the back of it, while glaring you in your brown eyes. I grin,
enjoying your excitement.
After seeing that I avoided your demanding pussy, you glare
at me, grab my head and guide me to your face. You kiss me deeply,
lots of tongue; I?m caressing your pussy and breasts. After
our kiss you say ?now lick my pussy, like you should have
before?, and push my face lower to your pussy, both hands
running thought my dark hair you grind your wetness into
my face, I am licking the whole length of it, your juices
running out over my face. You taste so sweet and salty.
I?m eating you like a made man, mouth running all over your
pussy, my nose buried in it, I pull away and rub your clit
and then go back and probe my tongue inside you. Your body
tenses up, you arc you back, and I feel your river flow madly
on my face. I peak up with a grin on my face, content with my
actions, but far from done. Without hesitation you start
rubbing my cock thought my boxers, my 8 inches are hard and
begging to be taken in by a willing mouth. You yank my boxers
down, my cock standing at attention, with my shaved balls.
You rub and lick my balls, avoiding my shaft much like I did
your pussy, driving me wild. You grab my throbbing fat cock,
and greedily take it into your mouth, pushing it in the sides
of your mouth as you rub my balls with your other hand. I?m
in heaven, staring down at you as you suck my cock and look
up with lustful eyes, I lean down and start rubbing your
pussy, your still dripping wet. Juices all over the bed,
you take your hands and grab my ass to push my cock in your
mouth further. I almost faint from the feeling of my cock
enveloped by your mouth?..
As your sucking, you?re wrapping your hand around my cock,
milking it, using your moth and hand like a long loving pussy.
You pull it out of your mouth and look at me ?Do you like it
baby? Do you like it when I suck your fat cock?? I respond
with my green eyes rolling in the back of my head ?ahhh please
don?t stop, your mouth feels so good?. You take the head
of my cock and rub it on your face, teasing the head with your
lips. Kissing the sides and then sliding it back in your
hot mouth.
I can?t take it anymore I have to eat your pussy again while
you suck my cock; I lie down on the ground and we move into
a 69. You slide your soft body on top, your luscious pert,
red haired pussy temptingly in front of me.
We both start satisfying the other, you stroke my cock while
your saliva is dripping onto it, then stuffing it hard in
your mouth while you jack in off, I?m grabbing your ass,
pushing my face into your pussy, rubbing my face back and
forth, my tongue driving you wild, I straighten it out to
probe your wetness, then flatten it out and sweep your pussy
lips clean of their juices.
You?re grinding your pussy
into my face, fast, smooth motions.
I sit up and you turn to face me, you wrap your legs around
me and kiss me, running your hands in my hair, hard passion
filled kisses. I push you away and let you glide my cock inside
you, you push down onto it and then I pull you close as were
fucking Indian style, I m pushing you down onto my cock,
your yelling out because I'm filling your pussy ?ahh, yea,
mmm, feels so good?, you kiss me deeply, breathing heavy,
I'm sucking your tits, lightly biting them, I get up while
my cock is buried inside you and star to bounce you on it ,
fucking me as your overwhelming me with your eyes, your
tits and red flaming hair bouncing.
You can hear our bodies slapping together, wet hot slapping
flesh; I lay you down on the edge of the bed, and grab your
legs, we are both sweating and I lick your salt sweat off
your left leg, start to slide my fat cock in and out of you
harder and faster. I thrust inside you, leaning in to suck
your tits and steal a kiss, you fuck me back loving my cock
inside you, all the while burning me with your eyes, I feel
my balls boil with my cum, ?mmmm? I hear from your moaning
your close. You look at me ?Ooo god, baby yea fuck me hard!,
fuck that wet pussy!? I pump harder and faster, I'm reaching
the point of no return, you yell out ?Cumm inside me, let
me feel you explode in my moist sweet pussy?
Taking your word, I pump my cock faster seeing your pussy
lips wrap around it , I?m seconds away from coming, your
begging me not to stop, I start rubbing your clit as I fuck
you, I feel you bucking, my body shutters as we reach our
peaks, you moan out ?ahhh my godd, ??.
I?m Cumming? this
sends me over, gushing my load inside you, I?m convulsing
from the overwhelming sensation, I pull it out and beat
it on your pussy lips, your in ecstasy
I see my cumm dripping from your pussy, you rub it into your
swollen lips, and I slide in one last time to make you feel
full again. You smile with a seductive grin ?ahhh yea baby
you fuck me so good?.